This is a real email from a university student, asking about a potential summer internship.
Qs: Having reviewed email best practices, what do you think about this email?
Qs: What did Vanessa do well?
Qs: What can she improve upon?
Generally, this email is very well drafted.
- Informative subject line
- Professional greetings and closing
- Sufficient detail but to the point
The email itself was quite good – but the attachment wasn’t!
This is why it is so important to always double check your recipients and attachments!